Food
All food is yummy,
But it may give you a big tummy.
Pop is nice to drink,
But you need to think.
Crispy snack is delicious too
However, your heart will say you are cruel.
Fruit is always tasty,
And it will bring you beauty,
Although vegetables looks not good,
But it helps you digest your food
Before you have snacks to eat,
You must think whether it is need.
I would like to have you comments.
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8 comments:
A lot of food.
m...yummy
but I still feel very hungry:p
good poem!!
Judy Law
Linking for the rap.
I played with my little bear until I was three.
And I ‘sang’ and ate when I was free.
There was a thing in my baby memory.
I jumped on my bed without clothes on my body!
Those were the days we’ll never forget (x2)
Kim Fung
Thank you so much Kim Fung for the rap lyrics and your poems. I love poems a lot and have started reciting when I was P.1. I hope you like the choral speaking thing we've been doing. I always think that that's the best way of learning English.
Your poems are great. Keep writing!
Miss Cheung
It was very nice!
I like your poem very much!
Yanni
good poem.
i like vege! they don't look good,but they are healthy!
amy lau (p.6 student)
Ithink this poem is quiet good because it is easy to read it and it is quiet interesting.
Christy F.1
so good
ngai chun long
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